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"___Norturnal_State_of_Mind___"
  by EboneeEyes


Ridin' up 64 staring at the night
Moon in a good mood, showing off his whole body
Cars swaying through lines
leading through lands capturing bright lights
Black sands on the sides
Lght mirroring the moon's ego
Twisting and turning in the tunnel
hovering below sea level, seaweeds and sea breezes
this is my life in real time, shinin'
grounded below endless time
leanin' on my baby singning to Kid Cudi's lines
as he's doin' a line on his musicality and mind
An artist who raps in his own world
Wishing to find that same zone of my own
Too busy inhaing wasted space into my dome
But right now it feels good
Ignorance frees my head in a way
knowing too much never will
Therefore I bathe in my bliss
sexing up the ride or die life
floating through space 'til the
morning suns arise
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Date Submitted: Nov 04, 2009 (10:28 PM)
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  ~*~itti~bitti~...
11/05/09 (04:58 PM) 
damn this was definantly v=creative. had me thinking;-- very descriptive. niiice:)

  santiago\\\\\\...
11/05/09 (12:11 AM) 
your dawn it one that i wish to grace with my own eyes... i miss this feeling...wanting more...need some form of closure but finding i need none...you write has sparked my interest in this style of writing i think i will have to work with you soon i'll need you to teach me more muse ...thank you..

  ghettoholidai9...
11/04/09 (11:26 PM) 
welll dam well dam ok i feels you and i know wat you talkin bout and i think every word was in perfect execution and i call this type of writin tru poetry but you bring uniqueness of your own im lovin it

  dagirl2fly4hat...
11/04/09 (11:04 PM) 
This was hot yo I rcks with ish hard....We gotta collob 1 day....

  patience
11/04/09 (11:02 PM) 
Your wordage is precise, concepts are blazing, and I love this piece ma. Great write

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