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"Not Feelin It 4real..."
  by Snickaz


So this place where I've sprouted n grown,
Is becoming less and less,
Of a home,
I wish I didn't feel this way,
Wasn't so alone,
But I also can't wait,
Till I'm gone,
Far away from CT,
A place that I've never really desired to be,
I hate the fake ways,
The games,
And the wanabe's,
Crackheads,
Alcoholics,
At 17...,
Trying to find real,
Is like a cinderella story,
It's pretty much impossible,
But when I leave,
It'll be with a sweet smile on my face,
Cuz I finally get to go away,
From this place.
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Date Submitted: Dec 18, 2008 (09:52 AM)
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  big josh
01/01/09 (10:34 PM) 
mad respect for u on dis one right here, u put ur heart in dis one, 10s ma much luv

  Nikkii*3
12/18/08 (06:07 PM) 
This is really nicely expressed.. It's a hard situation to be in; no longer able to call your place of living "home".. And it sucks. But happiness needs to be found and if that means finding a new home to start again then that is exactly what you need to do.. Nice write.. I'm sure you'll find home again.. Ten stars..

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