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"NOT SO, HARD WORK!"
  by Asu


Pores water this being’s land and an aorta floods love inside of it’s posture.

A greased elbow hands its arm a skill and then craft proceeds to build technique’s roster.

Tools materialize texture and detail coordinates each sector refining beauty due only truly to the greatest erector.

Mission complete, ribbon snipped. All who want are given it. As far as the criteria goes you’re welcomed are any critics.

As it stands legless and at the same time, oh so, moving the breathless builder ensures another plan for improving.

Knowing that time tackles, giving the at question hope and by optimistically leaping into problems you’ll hang on faith’s rope.

Let go and let your maker!
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Date Submitted: May 19, 2009 (09:28 PM)
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  Shani. Medicin...
06/04/09 (08:38 PM) 
Beautifully expressed as you lay down the builder's quest...and you end with leaping into problems you'll hang on faith's rope...facing one fears is faith, it is how you let go and let God.

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