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"Not Thiis Tiime"
  by Niikkii
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Messed Over by Fall3nAng3l


**TEE Babez...thanx man...fiinally able tuh get those words out**


Not thiis tiime...not ii
ii
Wiill not let you back iin
No not thiis tiime
ii
Wiill not let you wiin
Thiis liittle game that you
Contiinuously play wiith not
Only mah head but mah heart
Mah heart iis too fragiile
iit can`t take anymore
ii will not allow you tuh
Buiild me up && then turn
Around && tear me down
The paiin you steady briing
iis not somethiin` we need
&& wen ii say we
ii speak fuh me
Mah heart && mah head
Not the kiind of man that`Z needed
iin mah liife
Nuthiin but mysery && striife
You briing tuh thiis table
Of so called love

&& Not thiis tiime
No not ii...as much as ii
Want to...takiin you back
Agaiin...ii refuse tuh do such
Uhh thiing...cuz iif ii do that
Then ii`LL be choosiin YOU over ME

&& that riight there iis blatant
Stupiidiity...&& you see...ii wont
Let that happen agaiin...
Play me agaiin liike the
Chiildiish viideo games you play
Nah...ii wont make that same
Miistake

Even iif you beg...
Even iif you plead
Even tho you make me weak
ii wont let you succeed iin
Hurtiin me...we...are no good
Together...you`re no good for
Me...ii`M not what you want
&& baby you`re not what ii need

So no...not thiis tiime
No not ii, not you
Not us

There iis no us...destroyed that
When you destroyed mah trust
Must we contiinue tuh go thru
Thiis??...ii mean really
What`Z the poiint of all of thiis
Siince you wont do wutz best fuh
Me && you, ii wiill
GAME OVER baby cuz ii QUiiT!!!!!
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Date Submitted: Mar 23, 2008 (01:32 AM)
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  Ce-Ce
04/24/08 (08:22 PM) 
Dis iz a really gud write sis..Az i read dis, honestly, i wuz startin 2 get mad cuz i felt where u were cummn from..I felt every single word ma...Im diggin da way u broke da sentencez apart..I worked well..Awesomness

  B Easy
04/15/08 (08:39 AM) 
I didn't even read the original but the response was on point. This is a hot write indeed. Dam sis, i could feel what you feel just through the words that your sayin. Very emotional write. Keep up the good writes. Get at me

  B. Rose
03/23/08 (08:28 PM) 
Get em>... love the end... I know it felt to let that out yo... im lving the way you just came raw wit it

  ---
03/23/08 (10:10 AM) 
Even iif you beg... Even iif you plead Even tho you make me weak ii wont let you succeed iin Hurtiin me...we...are no good Together...you`re no good for Me...ii`M not what you want && baby you`re not what ii need <----y he ain't tell u?...lol...mad love lady

  Nilla
03/23/08 (04:30 AM) 
ii didn't know this was a response to Tee's piece (was on my way to read that next). BUT ii do know that this piece represents so much for me, mama. on the real. love the strength and the way you've made up your mind. hot shit, Nikkerz. =)

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