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"NOTEBOOK CONFESSIONS 2"
  by piss a mofo off


I can only touch her from a far
So I just sit here smothered in the darkness of space amongst the stars
Wishing I could lasso her wings and place her upon Saturn’s rings
As we walk around and I’d show her these are just lines of things
That I’ve written down
when I’ve lost myself in thoughts
of her being around
I want to channel
the signature of her energy
Into a constellation
And place it in space
Not just because from dusk till dawn I’d see her face
Vividly but in our next life my dedication
To find her I’d simply look to the sky
And find the brightest star too point out her destination
And our synergy shall become complete
We’d sit on the edge of my tapestry
And with our closeness in full bloom we’d create
New moons, new planets, comets and galaxies
Because in the next life I’ll search for her and find her
And tell her your majesty
Your king has found that which this
Physical world could not give
The life force to help me
feel alive and want to live
The reuniting of my rib
My Queen I’ve seen you in the past and I knew I’d have you
In my future
I had a dream
It was a reoccurring theme
But the difference in the scenes was
You by my side so until the next lifetime
I’ll hide smothered in this space amongst the stars
Admiring you from afar
Until our destiny has finally been aligned

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Date Submitted: Nov 06, 2009 (05:40 PM)
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  Angel
11/22/09 (09:07 PM) 
If there were a such thing as an afterlife, this poem would be so many people's realities. You had me dreaming right along with you for a minute there... beautiful thought and thorough love poem.. Thanks for sharing this one...

  Damami2burs4ev...
11/10/09 (09:26 AM) 
Beautiful. Love makes us want what we can't have. Or try to wait it out...Love In my future I had a dream It was a reoccurring theme But the difference in the scenes was You by my side so until the next lifetime<----Beautiful lines. Makes me cry...Sigh love it makes us to break us....To start all over again. Dope scribe...

  BSavvy
11/08/09 (09:47 PM) 
Oh wow~ your pen never cease to amaze me. What a write, the metpahors, you took look and described it all in a whole different way man loving your mind....

  BlessedOne
11/07/09 (12:08 PM) 
I am loving this. Has that Erykah Badu, Next Lifetime, feel. The great thing is, I can imagine this was written just for me. I like sitting at your feet as you share poet.

  MAVRICK
11/06/09 (06:40 PM) 
Smooth Move Lt. Columbo!!! I saw you chillin behind Mars peekin at Venus, tryna see if you can revolve around her borealis to make her stars twinkle..hahah...and if she don't dig you...fuk her..tell her to kiss Uranus!..haha!...This was definitely a deeply Universal write bro...much respect!

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