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"Now I"
  by Beautiful Soul
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Is She? by Catalina


Me and Mr. Jones (Fuckery) - Amy Winehouse


She…
Got my insecurities
Running wildly
Through the batter
Thickly settling
In the mix of
You and me….

Licking your fingers,
Not yet a cake
But still
She…
Let you eat

Biting
Nibbling

Tasty…pastries,
Sweetly delectably
Mouth watering

Appetizer?

She got you thirsty
Swallowing bullshit
While she sipping
slurping her sexual addiction

Hungry for what’s true
Yearning for
Nourishment
Fulfilling all
Nutrients you needed
To get through

Stick with what you know
But
You wanted to sample something new

After one taste of she…
The craving lingering
Lusciously appealing
Was not all that dish
**^^^cooked^^^***
Herself up to be…

Who knew?

Now I…
Seem to be
Scrumptiously
Deliciously good enough
For you…again




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Date Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 (05:11 PM)
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  Juicy1on1
09/07/08 (08:19 AM) 
A write with a twist. This was creative as hell and so full of truth reminded me of the say the grass is greener on the other side or so they thought. Nice this is added to my favs.

  KingArt
08/27/08 (03:59 PM) 
After reading, I feel like Flavor Flav, "Woooooooooooooooow!" It's like a wake up call to him. Like the presentation of temptation was far greater than the actual taste. It could not compare to the taste of home. Then it is like now that she is good enough "again" does she stay with him who had doubts. I love it!

  11th Wonduh
08/08/08 (04:00 PM) 
looks like someone wanted to indulge in the dessert, and once they got a taste was reminded that sometimes the sweet taste of sugar is with the other cake. enjoyable piece sistuh

  One
07/22/08 (07:47 PM) 
I agree with millah but...yeah...beautiful metaphors....much love ....no he can't eat

  LiquidFire
06/29/08 (11:50 PM) 
Ok, I had to reread this cuz the first time my mind wasn't right. So then the second time I got it, and u did the damn thing. I just smile at ur mind momma, u make me think, make me go to deeper places in my mind. Though this is simple enough behind the veneer, what u cloaked it in, the concept. Magical, and its funny how men taste the forbidden and find that its really sweet candy coated shit.

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