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"October 28, 2009 11:28am"
  by D Benitez


Hail a young woman’s scorn

Surrounded by women torn within discretions
These empty progressions of man vs. woman
On mother land to uncap further plans
She shall
Compete for her position amongst life & death.
Further seeking her importance that man failed to beget
How as people shall we correct?
As we fuel time’s fire earning history’s resentment.
When will ambitious ways see its withering reflection?
Vile crippling construction that woman vs. man has built.
Can we look at society & truly see our children wilt?

Welcome future of domestic catastrophe.
Because ambition loves competition
Seeking powerful position within relationships.
Modern day relation shit
How we carry much burden
Called lack of understanding
While barely standing
She and he
A fading hideous creation
Disastrous and destructive
The most glorious unification corrupted.

And so this poetry erupted
When did love become abducted?
A woman’s importance reluctant
A man’s significance destructive.

Hail these silent tears that will faintly appear
Within this young woman’s scorn.

~Delilah Benitez
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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (12:07 PM)
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  dadreama
11/03/09 (02:50 PM) 
fav <3 love it mama.

  iva
10/29/09 (03:49 PM) 
great poetry d

  AR-15
10/28/09 (12:45 PM) 
Nothing more powerful than a woman's scorn.. very interesting words...great work

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