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"October 7, 2009 9:08am"
  by D Benitez


Bled beauty
Surrounded by thorns of perfection
Growing from blessed rays of water shed
Eating from soils of profundity
Lovingly loving life
Hating none but hate itself
She pleasurably knelt upon his world
Hurdled in destructiveness
Hurt by man and woman’s
Ignorance to exploit
Exploring sexuality casually
Consuming casualty
Fleeting beauty’s actuality
As her stems grew thorns
Of scorn
Sworn away to a garden
Of shade grey
Her welcoming faded
Fading that breathtaking jade
And so his strength strayed when naming
That which was once naturally nameless
Consequences of empty gazes
Seeking only a kiss
For his appealing eyes
Beauty bled
Shed of her essence
Endangered & disguised.

~Delilah Benitez
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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2009 (09:52 AM)
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  iva
10/09/09 (03:21 PM) 
beautiful poetry d

  piss a mofo of...
10/07/09 (03:56 PM) 
'Eating from soils of profundity Lovingly loving life Hating none but hate itself She pleasurably knelt upon his world Hurdled in destructiveness Hurt by man and woman’s Ignorance to exploit..' most times it's not the person or 'things' that have the destructive effect on us it's the 'illusion' that was passed off as the 'real' thing

  AR-15
10/07/09 (10:05 AM) 
"Her welcoming faded, Fading that breathtaking jade, And so his strength strayed when naming, That which was once naturally nameless"... incredible lines in a more incredible piece... well written

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