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"oh mi god!!"
  by angel2strawberry


as mi and my partner wentinto the bathroom, closing the door behind us.
we stood in front of the miror like neyo say sex in front of da miror.
he puts me on top of da sink and gives mi diz stick like a brush
i turned around to look at mi face in da miror, and when i turned back around there waz diz wite substance on da stick!
oh mi god
he puts the stick in mi mouth
in and out in and out
up and down up and down
mi head goin in all different directions
so mi mouth begins to burn
is it because i haven't did diz in a long time?or wat?
so he gives mi some water
az i began to scream "it hurtz!!"
oh mi god!!
he tells mi to shut da hell up and goggle and then he said if u can't do dat then shut da hell up and swallow!
and i spit the water out,and he pats mi on mi head and says
"good girl!"
oh mi god
az by now u probly think we're havin sex rite?
oh mi god
but we're not
we're jus brushin our teeth
wat did ya'll think we waz doin?
ha ha fooled ya'll
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Date Submitted: Dec 11, 2007 (11:28 AM)
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  Combolo
07/13/09 (09:23 AM) 
nice ,,,,,,,,,,fo sho kip it up

  llih
04/10/08 (03:41 PM) 
that shit was crazy...man thata shit was weird...7 stars...

  BabyphatG
12/11/07 (11:57 AM) 
YO! You got me so bad. I thought that you were getting raped or something. For a moment my heart dropped. I thought that this com was going to turn out to be an inspirational one. That was good!

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