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"oh peacock ,oh peacock"
  by deezle


Oh peacock , oh peacock, so rare so arrayed with feathers so beautiful with a song so gay

Tell me on this wonderous day how dare you sway the minds of its dominions and control their opinions.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, with a glow so luminous, why must you abhor thee? You make me a horrible sight to see.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, could it be you're intimidated by me? you fail to see what inquiring eyes and minds want to be.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, your persuasion is my exacerbation, why do you keep me in isolation? I guess temptation haunts you because of fornication and masterbation, now you know you sinned.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, now I am pinned down, cornered by false ugliness but this is my scripture, my baptism, or my ejaculation in your eye so you can witness true beauty.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, I guess your feathers have never been stomped and still you chomp what is my birth right. You keep mind control tight and keep me out of sight. However, I love the darkness...darkness of night.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, Why can't you stifle this asinine militia of stupidity. You find me on a case of serendipity then stripped me of self- conciousness, self confidence. Now i am in a state of beauty not being a relevance.

Oh peacock, oh peacock, How can you adore transparent forms of intelligence, illusions and confusions of what is right and wrong. Now up is left and down is right when those who are blind claim sight. Now i refer to peacocks as crows.
Amor Bueno
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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2009 (10:04 PM)
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  floatingonthev...
11/03/09 (08:09 PM) 
This poem is really neat to me, I guess because.. I once wrote a poem about a lionfish.. I think God made certain creatures exceptional, and the way you explained everything in this poem is so detailed and beautifully done.. "Oh peacock, oh peacock, Why can't you stifle this asinine militia of stupidity." Never thought of stupidity like a militia.. but damn that's one hell of a comparison.. very dope poem. glad I read it tonight!

  InfinitiFR3AK
11/03/09 (07:08 PM) 
claps.xx

  ProtestxDay
11/03/09 (07:05 PM) 
symbol for beauty? prolly not but whatever i deff like the ejactulation part lol u should be a rapper

  alastor
11/03/09 (12:19 AM) 
i loved the innovative nature of this piece. not very conventional subject matter. i also loved the original marriage of words you used. signs of a true wordsmith. great write

  QueenV
10/08/09 (11:55 PM) 
Lol my ejaculation in you eye.... Haha.... I would refer to them as a crow aswell because an evil person like that doesn't deserve such beauty.... Looks can be decieving ;) another nice poem. Nice choice of words reminds me a bit like shakesphere with the old school lyrics. Nice.

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