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"On a limb (very short)"
  by Tpoet


New steps taken
on a limb I step following dreams
as eyes close hoping not to fall
allowing winds hope to carry me away
placing my heart in your hands
hold tight and gide me
so I may lead you someday
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Date Submitted: Apr 30, 2009 (10:25 AM)
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  datboyjada
06/14/09 (06:21 PM) 
dis was short but u have a way wit words beautiful. u def did ur thing on dis

  big josh
06/09/09 (09:59 PM) 
damn, ay this was short but it was indeed a beautiful write, nice job :)

  Poetic Lyricis...
05/14/09 (09:30 AM) 
Little words that weighs heavy on the heart---Nice piece

  Nu Blaq Though...
05/14/09 (07:19 AM) 
I love the way you allude to the TRUST factor in this piece. Outstanding !

  Amayzn
05/13/09 (09:41 PM) 
short but righteous.....I'm feeling you here....great scribe!!

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