Angel...my heart wants to give up..but this is my truth (was{always} your wife)...true test of faith..and I'm failing. Tears welled as I read this...absolutely beautiful and beautifully written..as usual.
Dont know Angel I felt like you were not sure of this write I felt the write but my heart stumbled a little could be me or the fact I know there is more fire to this either way I respect just a little something missing for me
this is a really good write man an keep up the good work i understand wat ur getting at an i understand what you mean in this poem an ur a reallly good poet so keep up all this good work an i wanna hear more stuff like this cuz you are really good well keep up the good work
10 stars fersher!=D