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"On My Chest"
  by B. Rose


Arising...

Those big bright eyes staring at me
Waiting to be held

He wakes up again to be held by his father

... Me

So him I feed
Burp him and assist him into a relaxed state of mind

As time progresses he's eyes become heavy
So I gently lay him on top of my chest
For him to sleep soundly
As both of our hearts beats in sync
But yet so differently...

As look at him with the proudest look
And wonder
What is the concept of his dreams
As he sleeps serene...
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Date Submitted: Oct 10, 2009 (02:50 PM)
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  Monae'
11/15/09 (01:51 AM) 
Awww i know that must be the most beautiful thing to see...your child sleep. I know I used to like to watch my sister sleep when she was young and she would look soo kute! And my mom said she used to watch me also. You are right...they do sleep so serene. 100 stars for the babies!

  PoeticallyDefi...
11/10/09 (05:20 PM) 
this is soooo beautiful...loved every line right to the end...good stuff keep it comin

  Ladyoflyrics
10/30/09 (01:39 AM) 
i have always loved the way you loved on those children perfect pen papi

  Shye201
10/29/09 (10:03 PM) 
aaaawwww a tear......not that i'm trying to be nice or anything lol but nice write

  Lady_Style
10/21/09 (11:38 AM) 
Awww...this is simply wonderful B. There\'s nothin better than seein a man take great pride in his child x

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