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"On Paper"
  by Mr. RTJ


Jotting down all wonderous qualities
They outlined her magnificence
Creating a plan that her significance in his life is a necessity
And it would be best for he if she and he
Were to become a bless’ed we

Characteristics seemingly flawless
Pro’s out weighing the cons
Yet it never dawns that this is just on paper
But with such a poious character
It can not be dreamt that later he could see himself hate her

Her beauty only outshined by the sun in the sky
Her personality playful in nature
How she can cater to a playful environment then in the blink of an eye
She can maintain emotional sensitivity
Mental connectivity and being affectionate so caringly
And displays initiative to attempt new ventures so daringly

Independent yet able to depend
Strong in will and able to defend
Contains the ability to stand on her own two feet and defeat any obstruction
Highly goal oriented
It just creates goose bumps on the skin
Knowing the depth of the character that rest within

However

When put into implementation
The outline seems off
The blueprint fades into shades of grey
Devotion is not seen
Communication is lost
A wondrous engagement becomes a dangerous attachment
As the plan of two connecting hearts was snatched and went else where
Reality sets in
The reality that the basis of judgment was slightly off
Her angelic essence to him turned despicably ugly
That initial beauty disappeared as vapor
Now that he realizes she only looked good on paper

4/30/2008
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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 (02:46 AM)
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  da' hottest 10
12/21/08 (01:42 AM) 
i'm hurt

  Lex Libra Baby...
09/27/08 (01:09 PM) 
Wow.. she only looked good on paper.. that was a great last line because it really sticks with you ya know? I had one of those before.. looked better on paper.. or in the description of him.. but in actuality.. the reality was much different.. That was one marvelous description too!

  A Tatiana S.
09/19/08 (12:15 AM) 
OMG. i love it....i loved how you ended, at first I didnt kno how you were going to end it but u ended it well..marvelous work

  ladybugkk'sbab...
09/07/08 (08:13 PM) 
I can feel u on dis im yung but seen alot n been thro alot good write im realy feelin it FAV 10stars

  1truelady
08/28/08 (10:14 PM) 
Great work ....I see alot of potential keep it going 10 stars

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