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"On some Gangsta shit"
  by glo
  - This Poem is a response to the poem On some gangsta shit by SpitFire


-you take me out? i gotta be kidding me
-i'm take you out like the assasination of kennedy
-i'm the street, gutter, ally and muthafucka sidewalk
-the only you be part of the street is the white chalk
-bitch what,
-keep ya lips shut
-before you get cut
-you gimp fuck, i'm like a alien birth nigga, i rip gut
-i got homies quarterbackin while you just runnin back
-you the weakest face in the deck , ima do a jumpin jack
-see i know you the hollywood type but start acting up
-or i'll leave you connected to a machine that sound like a truck backin up
-see you been lucky, i turned a cheek when i heard you was tryin to shit talk
-be gbaby and spitifre, will pop ya legz and make it look like you were trying to crip walk
-To my emeny, u garbage like old calendars
-u a cap gun while i detach limbs in 1 shot like a 50 caliber
-rifle, snipe ya, wit verse dat guaranteed to fuckin damage ya
- u a basketball, call me hot sauce, da way i handle ya
-the is dude is wreck sir, whip this bitch, i'll leave em with damaged neck nerves
-he couldn't kill a track even if he stabbed the record
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2007 (09:13 AM)
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  mzmimi
12/03/07 (01:11 AM) 
hot hot hot, keep it going blazing.

  DAKING!
12/02/07 (02:45 AM) 
May i say Wow. This was krazy as hell i digg the meta4's and punchlines. i hope i don't make you upset or mad if so may God save me. Lol It's gavy Good work

  night light
11/27/07 (11:43 PM) 
This is thight! Nice flow and l really like the line, I got hommies quarterbackin whille you just running back I feel you on that. 10 stars.

  baby wiggles
11/22/07 (09:24 AM) 
let me tell you this god has blessed you with the gift of poetry keep ya pen movin

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