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"On that sweetest day"
  by tweeky


Its not the way you look
Its the way you are
You told me once i was your shining star
On sweetest day you were surprised
The things i did filled your eyes
Me thinking in my head its only one you
Witch makes me do the things i do
I rode you til your eyes rolled back into your head
While listening to that song jay-holiday put you ta bed
See i wanted you more than any other day
Baby how did you do that you'd always say
you said baby thats enough let me please you
i said gone head baby do what you do
But one thing i can say
i had fun on that sweetest day
TO EVERYBODY AND THEIR MOMMA HAPPY SWEETEST
DAY!! I KNOW IAM LATE LOL
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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2007 (07:22 PM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
07/31/09 (07:23 PM) 
for some reason this reminds me of a poem i wrote a long time ago and im lovin' the theme though i didnt have a happy sweety's day this year....thanx

  0g'Shynj
11/08/08 (10:26 PM) 
i like this...its sweet

  mspassion
10/20/08 (10:52 AM) 
THAT WAS CUTE LOVE~

  King Sa'Ra
10/08/08 (02:52 PM) 
You have skillz, another 10 lol, mad propz.

  KiNg-Go0B3r
08/08/08 (11:00 PM) 
ok ok im feelin this this was prety guud lookin foward to readin more

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