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"On The News"
  by Snugasaglove (The Rebirth)
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Making Them Ends by Snugasaglove (The Rebirth...





.....Now, they both a weapon
But, in the tussle, one lost hold of his gun
And so, with no protection, he started to run
As the other fired three shots at his retreating back
Another crime statistic: "Black On Black"

And as the sirens screamed,
Never would he have imagined
Before this end-of-the-week day had begun
That he started it, an "upright" brotha
And finished it, looking at Murder One.
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Date Submitted: Mar 27, 2009 (12:04 AM)
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  big josh
06/13/09 (11:14 PM) 
damn reality bites

  BlessedOne
03/27/09 (07:57 PM) 
I am a mystery, forensic, who-done-it buff; so I am happy to see you bringing an end to our suspense. I had a feeling that it would be the upright brotha who prevailed in the fight because he was used to hard work and struggling to make it.

  .Always.Catali...
03/27/09 (12:22 PM) 
I don't be on here like that no more...glad I stopped thru to see you though..as always...the pen is might and writing the truth! much love Snug...*fish hug*

  THE LISA
03/27/09 (08:21 AM) 
So sad....either way you look at this, they both lose....but, at least I can write him in jail. lol

  mikeb30
03/27/09 (01:44 AM) 
:( realities

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