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"One Day"
  by mz_April


I always had hope
but never really thought
that I could find love

and
one
day
I
stopped
believeing

Having hope cause more pain
fooling myself
into thinking
that someone could love me

and
one
day
I
made
a
friend

Hes what I needed
someone to talk to
a person I can tell anything

and
one
day
something
changed

My feelings
when I thought
of my friend
I felt like my world
was finally complete

and
one
day
I
said
I
love
you

and he couldn't
say it back
he cared for me
but he just wasn't ready

and
it
hurt
like
hell

but still I could not
give up on him
I stayed
and told him
how much I loved him each day

and
one
day
he
said
it
back

My heart skipped a beat
I thought I was dreaming
for the first time in my life
a man loved me
I should of known
with hope
that love could happen
One Day.
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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2009 (04:35 PM)
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  big josh
08/27/09 (06:06 PM) 
aww dis was asweet write, nice :)

  *Jazique*
08/22/09 (01:17 AM) 
Idk why you don't have more comments on this write, but I love this....you should never give up...

  Young Street P...
07/23/09 (05:04 PM) 
Yeah, sometimes that's how it is ma....sometimes it just pays to be patient and not give up....a lot of things get accomplished by being patient....there is a difference between being patient and waiting too long....and the difference is one is called being patient and the other is called waiting too long....;)

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