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"one last beer"
  by A.Renee




*These MFin Pink Dreams

shawty dont like me cus my 59 fifties part of my wears
and i keep As, studs n stars in ma ears
but im get my record poppin n wen i startin ta win
i\'ll have her sayin freaky shit like nikki minaj in ma ear
so much shit happened i gotta be the heartthob of the year
so scared ta see the future ihide in my mirror
and hip hop is the only shit im tryina be hearin
so let smoke my blunt n let me have that one last beer(2x)

so im up here, no luck here, have no fear super villain here
ima tell you quite clear, im the biggest loser of the light year
only on beer left, shawty dance out of my life she got steps
aint nothin like the rest, maybe thats wat the problem is
i aint had that much experience
or i have a curse or im jus inferior
delierous, but no need to fuss
drinking my beer on the stop for the bus
brain leakin
hard to focas, heart hard to open
tryin ta read in inorgance smoke go my mind chokin
its likke a haunted house wit no way out
makke me wanna pop my eye balls out
no comfort, wipe my ass wit leaves
white ppls kool aid, so un sweet
wish i can write so deep shit n get some folks moved
but my shit like the shallow end in the pool

wonder what be going though her mind
on that carl shit iwish i never met her man
wats wit old girl, what she better than
the love i gave you, the type that make u quiver man
give me a lil time i would have grew
if you had a lil paintnce i could\'ve still been wit u
but now u moved up and im fallin
smoke that Mary J it give u no more drama
get drunk n put on my momma\'s music
if you think your lonley now do what im doin
thoughtout the years earphone still im my ears
while i smoke my blunt n drink my one last beer
shawty dont like me cus my 59 fifties part of my wears
and i keep As, studs n stars in ma ears
but im get my record poppin n wen i startin ta win
i\'ll have her sayin freaky shit like nikki minaj in ma ear
so much shit happened i gotta be the heartthob of the year
so scared ta see the future ihide in my mirror
and hip hop is the only shit im tryina be hearin
so let smoke my blunt n let me have that one last beer
pass it to me, lit a lil piece
i need be gone, hit home, come down for a feast
its like shawty left way before her lease
before she got to experience my beast
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Date Submitted: Sep 06, 2009 (11:57 PM)
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  Showcase
10/18/09 (02:47 PM) 
I like this nice flow I mad it has been overlooked but I love it and great song choice as well this was hot pEACE.elevate

  Bubblicious
10/09/09 (07:06 PM) 
Yo poem have a lot of swag keep up the good work

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