NOT THIS AGAIN
IM BOUT TO WALK OUT AGAIN
BUT I WENT OFF
TALKING SO MUCH JUNK
LOOK AT ME NOW...
ALMOST PUT MY HANDS ON YOU...BUT I DIDNT
AND I WONT GET MAD IF YOU LEAVE
HERE...I GOT THE DOOR OPEN FOR YOU
LEAVE ME...YOU DONT NEED ME
YOU DONT NEED ME TALKING LIKE IM PERFECT
BUT BEFORE YOU GO JUST KNOW (I AM SORRY)
AND I TIRED OF MAKING YOU CRY
JUST WANTED YOU TO SEE MY POINT AND YOU WOULDNT LISTEN
SO IF I DO HAVE ONE LAST CHANCE...LET ME MAKE IT RIGHT
...PLEASE...
AND IM NOT ALL THAT...I NEED YOU
AND I LOVE YOU
I KNOW ITS NOTHING I CAN SAY TO MAKE YOU STAY
BUT I REALLY DONT WANT YOU TO GO
BABY PLEASE LETS NOT FIGHT NO MORE
WHAT CAN I DO...TELL ME...JUST STAY
I DONT CARE ABOUT NOTHING ELSE
AND IM NOT ALWAYS RIGHT
BUT JUST LISTEN TO ME...
HEAR ME...
LET ME TALK...
LET ME BE A MAN AND AND TAKE THE PAIN AWAY
.............................................................................................................................
ON MY KNEES WITH MY HEAD DOWN CRYING
SHE COMES AND HOLD ME
DOWN ON HER KNEES TOO
WE CRYING
BABY IM GOING TO DO IT
IM GOING TO CHANGE FOR REAL
AND SOFTLY SHE TELLS ME...
LAST CHANCE
OMG!!! I love it. But why wouldn't someone listen to you? If you speak the way you write you would be able to command a country if you needed to!! lol nice work. alot of raw emotion in this, at least that is what im getting.
Awww I love the ending. When she gets down on her knees with you..sign of equality and understanding. I hope you do...because this is your Last chance haha.
this was nice,very intriging indeed,you did a good job pulling us in and describing the emotions, i felt like i was there watcing it like a movie,very nice poet