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"One times two ( LD Challenge )"
  by angeleyes1


Images of words written in this rhyme,
One times two we loss in time,
The emotions that we once felt,
Tainted memories upon which I once dwelt,
One times two we live this verse,
Love and torment and the need to disperse,
Pain scribbled on these pages,
One times two unfolded in stages,
Moments loss and tears of pain,
Smiles appear in the amidst of the rain,
One times two mistakes can't be erased,
And passionate tempers that suddenly blazed,
Snapshots of love and feelings of fright,
One times two we had tasteful delights,
Our love at it's fullest has been gifted,
The ink of our lives have been scripted,
One times two our clouds tinted,
I've written the truth with words now printed,
Our friendship broken and failed the test,
One times two of anger we expressed,
My voice is silenced and my pen is my tongue,
To tell the stories of pain that clung,
One times two scrawled on this sheet,
Survivor of love, I don't suffer defeat!

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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2009 (11:52 PM)
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  bbeauty
08/29/09 (10:54 PM) 
THAT'S RIGHT BECAUSE YOU'RE SIMPLY.......... "ONE TIMES TWO 'A SURVIVOR AND CONQUEROR NEVER TAKE DOWN AND CONTINUE TO STAND.....B BLESS

  Cornfed
08/28/09 (07:05 PM) 
You always paint the picture in bright strong colors so your point is never lost!10

  D.K Lord of Da...
08/28/09 (01:25 PM) 
Soz my mind not kicking into gear.. I meant you never disappoint and never fail to impress me with your skills.. Accept my appologies for the way that came out. Much love mammi on an impressive piece of prose. DK

  D.K Lord of Da...
08/28/09 (01:23 PM) 
Angel been to long since i read your drops. but nether less you never fail to disappoint. This piece was full of depth passion and real talk as the verbage stood out ..much love always DK

  santiago\\\\\\...
08/28/09 (01:16 AM) 
too much to grip lady but enough sate any beast that dares tread softly on this piece the emotion and passion not to mention just the flow of this was just overwhelming from beginning to end you made my day with this congrats on a great piece fav

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