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"ONLY"
  by Tiku


Only running of fingers
Only raining of kisses
Only fondling of breasts
Only shedding of dresses

Only jumping onto beds
Only switching off the light
Only whispering of lust
Only negotiating the height

Only caressing of spots
Only rolling of frames
Only flowing of liquid
Only dousing of libidinous flames.
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2009 (01:06 PM)
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  sujetta
11/07/09 (10:11 PM) 
great..i like

  Blayzn 10
10/27/09 (01:59 PM) 
This is very thought provoking, you really shed so many emotions with your pen on this one... your last line is a fine one to end with :) nice drop!!

  The Clinician
10/26/09 (10:06 PM) 
Good shit as usual. I like the flow of this and the smoothness of the essence that your words paint for me.

  floatingonthev...
10/26/09 (12:56 PM) 
this is really nice, I really enjoy how you wrote it, so emotional and just stuck in that moment... Nice write. Thank u for the comment.

  NeshaW1
10/11/09 (12:26 AM) 
lol wow so in the moment

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