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""Only One""
  by Luckqui


For about a year and some change now
This whole thing had begun

For abotu a year and some change now
I had treated you like you was the ONLY ONE

I had my dude
You had ya girl

But...we both stayed inside each other's world's

From a like to a strange love>:
We had struck up>:
And from this like>:
We had to know...
What was up...
Wit each other's Love

And not 'til bout a month ago
Did we both find out>
What each other's lovin'>
Was really about...

Beleive me>
Talked a good game>
Dude stood and delivered>
Body sore fa' days>
Made the body quiver...

He thought he was the first..
Too late...cuz it was all said and done...
Had this dude thinkin

He was the ONLY ONE

Be wrong as hell not to tell'em-
So ima make it right-
Keep my mouth
Shut
Sealed
Glued tight...

Now-
The dude's gotta girl
I guess feeling's gotta be said and done...

I should tell'em he wasn't the first
PAYBACK IS A B***H
.......................
Nah...ima let'em keep thinkin'
He
Was
Da
ONLY ONE


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Date Submitted: Mar 16, 2008 (06:09 PM)
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  Kat Nicole
07/16/08 (10:55 PM) 
nice piece. i like the flow of it..def thought it was going end differently...and dang at fooling him like that...def 10 starzzzz -- Kat

  ~KeiBeryDoughG...
06/16/08 (10:16 AM) 
GRL I FEEL YA....JUS TELL HIM DIS ONLY 1 N DATS U....H8 HER IF U WNT 2 CUZ U ISNT STOPPIN NO SHOW...

  09krayzlegz09
06/11/08 (02:30 PM) 
this is hott...loved the flow...keep yo fingers movin....most deff ten stars..

  deepsoulbrutha...
06/06/08 (06:33 PM) 
o yeah i'm digging this one really gud write

  Stiicky
06/06/08 (01:11 AM) 
I agree, this was HOTT!! i love the concept and ya flow is crazy!! def 10 stars

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