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"OOOOOOOHHHH AAHHHHHHHHHHH"
  by BabyBoi


You make me feel, ooo, ahh, wait a minute, let me stop.
When I think of your hands caressing my body, it makes me want to pop,
like a champagne bottled being opened.
We make love in our minds, without words being spoken.
When our eyes connect, our soul conspires, it ignites a hot, burning, unquenchable fire, that can only be turned in, to be turned out,
by the waves of ectasy, all because i want you and you want me.
Let's make it last from sun up to sunset. My soul is burning, and we havent even gotten started yet. Volcanoes erupting into rythmic flows and expressions of ooh and aahhs. How do you do the things that you do, that makes me want to run on hot coals just to get to you.
Oh, you do what you do so well, I cant even begin to tell, or descibe the feeling that you cause me, to feel in the depths and wells of my soul.
Oh, the connection, the inception of waterfalls exuding from our bodies, when we stop. OHH, Ahh. Ooooooooooo AAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
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Date Submitted: Feb 27, 2007 (12:38 PM)
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  speakout17
01/25/08 (03:24 PM) 
good deep write

  mindigoblue
01/25/08 (03:09 PM) 
Whoa....this is really nice. Great flow, very smooth and sensual. Erotic but not nasty, def 10 starz for this one.

  11th Wonduh
10/02/07 (10:30 PM) 
classy piece, the visual itself is not erotic, but more sensuous, private, sexy. great piece

  K.Desiree
09/01/07 (01:21 PM) 
I love that erotic in your eyes is not XXX. Gold star.

  LilMomma
05/10/07 (04:55 PM) 
i like this one. it really had me into it. it made me think i was the one sayiin ooo aaahhh lol. anyways keep it up iight? 1

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