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"Open Your Eyes...."
  by Shar


The door to my heart is closing
Visions of you standing behind it
Is now clearer to see
For me….
Only to you its wide open
Door less if you’re concerned
How could you be so blind?
Why can’t you see how you’re forcing me to leave you behind?
So many promises broken
Matching the many pieces of my shattered heart
Were falling apart
Held together by lies
Just tell me you’re never returning
Tell me there’s no us or we
No wedding date no more ring
I know this, why don’t you?
Remove yourself from the state of denial
That you have grown so comfortable with
Love me enough to release me
Release my heart and soul
Close the door
I’ll close it
Knock… knock… knock
It’s too late now
Cry the tears of a clown
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (01:05 PM)
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  Stoykes
08/13/09 (01:42 PM) 
talk about emotional....i like this inner struggle you're displaying in this write. sometimes evn when goodbyes are the best for a scenario, it doesn't make it any less easier. great work....as always. ~Stoykes

  CHEESEY BREAD
08/02/09 (02:45 PM) 
WOW SHAR THIS IS SO DEEP TO MY HEART... PEOPLE DO GO THOUGH THING BUT THEY WORK THEM OUT NOT LEAVE OR HAVE LOST OF TRUST ...WE WILL GET THOUGH THIS....

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