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"OPEN YOUR HEART"
by smily
- This Poem is a response to the poem
A GOOD MAN TREATED WRONG
by
TWANGINU
YES YOU ARE THE GOOD MAN THAT WE ALL LONG FOR
AND ALSO THE GOOD MAN THAT SHE'S DOING WRONG
BUT NOT FOR LONG
CAUSE I'M HERE TO TAKE HER PLACE
AND HER IN YOUR MIND WILL BE ERASED
AND THAT MASTER KEY TO YOU HEART THAT YOU THROW AWAY
I'M THE LOCK SMITH DADDY COME MY WAY
DON'T WORRY ABOUT NOTHING
CAUSE IT'S LOCKED DOWN
YOU ARE A KING DADDY
COME GET YOUR CROWN.
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Jun 14, 2009 (09:47 PM)
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COMMENTS (2)
B. Rose
06/14/09 (10:01 PM)
That beautiful right there yo... its always good when a lady recognizing her king... nice...
TWANGINU
06/14/09 (09:52 PM)
NOW THAT REALLY TOUCHED YOUR BOY HEART.ALL I CAN DO IS SMILE.YOU REALLY KNOW WHAT TO SAY.I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU MORE STARS 4 THIS ONE.THANK YOU.
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