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"OPEN YOUR HEART"
  by smily
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A GOOD MAN TREATED WRONG by TWANGINU


YES YOU ARE THE GOOD MAN THAT WE ALL LONG FOR

AND ALSO THE GOOD MAN THAT SHE'S DOING WRONG

BUT NOT FOR LONG

CAUSE I'M HERE TO TAKE HER PLACE

AND HER IN YOUR MIND WILL BE ERASED

AND THAT MASTER KEY TO YOU HEART THAT YOU THROW AWAY

I'M THE LOCK SMITH DADDY COME MY WAY

DON'T WORRY ABOUT NOTHING

CAUSE IT'S LOCKED DOWN

YOU ARE A KING DADDY

COME GET YOUR CROWN.
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Date Submitted: Jun 14, 2009 (09:47 PM)
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  B. Rose
06/14/09 (10:01 PM) 
That beautiful right there yo... its always good when a lady recognizing her king... nice...

  TWANGINU
06/14/09 (09:52 PM) 
NOW THAT REALLY TOUCHED YOUR BOY HEART.ALL I CAN DO IS SMILE.YOU REALLY KNOW WHAT TO SAY.I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU MORE STARS 4 THIS ONE.THANK YOU.

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