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"Opened Window"
  by ...Da Futurist Fort...





.self liberation.
serenaded her flight
over his .admiration.
his love landed rock solid

heart grounded

resounding
endearing emotions coasting
floating cloudless

he watched her

soaring

smitten him completely
she was convinced
his expressive .fondness.
supplied a .blissful sense.
of temporary satisfaction

set love free

see it fly

fluttering

believe deeply in it

endure the lows & highs

the love exhilaration

skys the limit

watching her rise
elevation

chainless destinations

unselfishness

a confidant

meant .confinement.
in her evident translation

he considered their karma of separation
his smeared fascination

refused his loneliness
the option was .unbearable.

she was .stifled.
.caged.
for exclusivity

!she was just too damn beautiful!

too restless

the devotion guilt consumed his confused .consciousness.

wasn’t a question of .faithfulness.
their answer was never an issue of fidelity

she symbolized a free spirit

seeking

a distinctive kind of nonrestrictive .peace...

an innate quality he couldn’t submit
for her sacrifice was remaining .landlocked.

his love pulled him into two different directions

a battle between mercy verses desires


set love free

see it fly

fluttering

believe deeply in it

endure the lows & highs

the love exhilaration

skys the limit

watching her rise
elevation

chainless destinations


sometimes greed impedes us
we forget about ‘we’ & start overemphasizing ‘I’

:obsession:
the combined byproduct of love insecurity & lust straining trust
:affection:
causes affects hangovers isolation distrust frustration doubt

her intentions converted to trying to find a clear harmless way out

the weighed reality is
a break up is never flawless
someone will resent less

she’d stare for hours out of the .window.
glancing straight up to stars & moon dust
reflection on the glass

her breath fogged facial features
tracing her sorrow tears fears of suffocation
he was attuned

caught in between
.truth & heart.
which expressed tainted lies

holding onto to a past unbreakable companionship

presently

shes dying to fly


set love free

see it fly

fluttering

believe deeply in it

endure the lows & highs

the love exhilaration

skys the limit

watching her rise
elevation

chainless destinations


passion changes
patience wears .thin.
as her sensitive .skin. he caresses tightly

she prefers to ascend .alone.
absence
may make a heart grow fonder

he was scared of experiencing the feeling perish with her deserved vacancy


…so he left the window open.. hoping this would be symbolic …

…she was set free…

the same reason that makes one stay
is
the same reason why others leave…
.
.
.

.
…love contains bittersweet irony…

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Date Submitted: May 25, 2009 (05:22 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Neurotically I...
05/28/09 (02:54 PM) 
a wonderful story indeed...sigh

  --->QUEENPIN O...
05/26/09 (09:01 AM) 
omg Fort....I dont think i have ever read anything like this from u...them last few statements u made...so fuckin true...damn....i loved the repetition in this piece....this is prolly one of the most beautiful joints i have read in a long time...im damn near speechless...im so used to u talkin shit...lol...ima have to fav this...WOW

  mariposa
05/26/09 (06:21 AM) 
deeply felt observations as he is very aware of his desires vs her desires, this is not always the case in a relationship, one knows something is wrong but is unable to admit what the problem is... although he wants to be selfish, he is very aware of her need to be free... this poem starts off with that agony of realization, and in the middle we hear the logical voice enter for a few important lines (sometimes greed impedes us....),and then we experience the longing of the heart again... the evi...
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  H.H. Holloway
05/25/09 (06:13 PM) 
Set love free... set it fly... fluttering... hmmm, I wish that I could actually capture the entire atmosphere of the picture that you conveyed within this but my mind isn't as fast as yours, so like all minor poets, I shall fave this and study this (as I do all your poets) I still think you're the Aesop Rock of poetry, but that's just me... *Vulcan Sign*

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