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"Opined writing"
  by ---
  - This Poem is a response to the poem open writing by Blakfiya


When O(h) pined
we O(h) pen

When re signed
we re sin

Oh well, Well then...

Sin fully is the sap for
getting stuck in sticky situations
this & that
often fo(e) cus(s)es upon up
bringing familiar melodies
being re citing fucked up shit
mean
while singing

...Same song with throat scratched

Again after woe
fully pre tending facts
with
Out pre pondering this & that
with

Out putting your faith with
in a wo(e)man

Ridiculously wondering why you are
obviously still yearning
& O(h) pen on pines & needles
after oft replacing your self
worth

"Less, left with feelings that aren't left in,
tact"

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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (11:37 AM)
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  ♀ de.la....
07/16/09 (05:44 PM) 
every single time you tear it up. you switched it up but kept it amazing. i'm still re-reading it tryna juice it dry. hotness as usual.

  Jody
07/16/09 (05:12 PM) 
you are def good w/ this style... "*O(h)pen on pines & needles after oft replaces your self worth" to me, that sums up the entire piece and is the reason behind the emotion.... and then the last part... is the effect... like cause & effect... enjoyed.

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
07/16/09 (05:05 PM) 
Man.... Now this was metaphorically out of control fam. Enjoyed to the fullest how you creatively crafted this. Definitely my fav.............

  drybaggij
07/16/09 (03:31 PM) 
you flipped and bounced the hell outta that concept. you did that.

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