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"Oral Fixation"
  by Gillian Rivera


Clouds all around me...oh here it comes again...the drowning...smoke fades...my head I raise..to see your face...coming down in my evil ways...dismay...the courage decays...the love I fucking hate. You gave me this as you made me give...not wanting to love it....yet here it is. Your mouth, your touch, I drown as you fuck....the longest kiss that I miss. Makes me sick. You have broken me in disarray. All I can think of is your mouth in so many ways...I can't breath....your mouth coerced my lips to touch yours over and over again. Oh your mouth...as it goes down. Showing me the anatomy of hell. Words linger...the thoughts dismember....my head is apart...mutilated ideas all in the dark....I'm mental and its your fault...its your mouth and its work, its worth... in and out....nothing hurts me more than your mouth.....you had me open yet you left me closed. I fucking hate you for the words that you chose. You gave me this, how you made me wish....you're the reason I fucking hate you, you stupid bitch...wishing this feeling dead...you're evil now as you were my evil in bed....so much greed...but I'd fuck it again just like a fiend. Your mouth as all need. Now as I need it within....I want to sin...over and over again....I cherish this all...you and your mouth. Fucking take me, make me...break me....I hate you as much as you hate me....I don't care to know you, just fuck you and disown you....you and your mouth....my devil child with a pout. My head is light...the air is thin....I cant see you, but I feel you within....you gave me this....you made me give... hating you is where it begins...without asking...I'll take it over and over again...so bad....I need your mouth within what it's already had....my sin.
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2007 (02:55 AM)
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  ~~~Prettysugar...
12/09/07 (04:42 PM) 
damn i came emotionaly involved with your poem...doesnt happen offen... 10* plus 3 snaps

  D.K Lord of Da...
12/09/07 (01:49 PM) 
LIKE DA FLOW ON DIS. ITS REAL RTIGHT AND IM LURVIN DA WAY ITS BEEN LAYED DOWN..

  STYLES C.
12/09/07 (01:22 PM) 
Very emotionally packed piece..loved the realness expressed in between these lines keep it up POET

  heaviness
12/09/07 (10:59 AM) 
read it sober - not much read it drunk - got touched read it high - got a cry re-read it sober and share your soul

  Blaque Beauty
12/08/07 (12:33 PM) 
Dam I feel you I'm there right now. It' s so raw and real all I can say is I feel that.

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