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"Outside My Window (A Verisma & Slick50 Collabo)"
  by Verisma


Slick50-

Outside the clouds are icy gray

~&~ the rain is falling as

Hard as the tears on my pillow

I can't see the world outside my window.


Verisma-


Usually numb to the viscous pain,

Without a clear veiw,

Realizing I'm blinded by it all,

Echoing,

Can't see, but hear your voice like I'm near you.


Slick50-


A ghost, but in my mind it's more than

My imagination, That has me wanting you.

Honey, You can stay in my life with me,

~&~ Baby you don't have to leave...



Verisma-


Haunted when your presence cease to exist,

Here is where you need to be, No need to resist.

The tears on my pillow persist only to represent...

There is no comfort In the face of Loneliness.


Slick50-




I'm so lonely without your lips, Still taste the

Sugar...

From the last time we kissed.

Your love is as warm As the sun when we hug.



Verisma-



Your embrace held me together like the sky

Holds the stars above. Wishing for that feeling

Once again,

Puzzling the pieces takes me back,

Traces me back to where it all begin....



Slick50-


Back to the time when it was all so simple then...

Back to the time our hearts use to beat at the same pace-

~&~ Our relationship wasn't...

So complicated then...



Verisma-



Back when ? Back then... When it was all no question,

Went out on whims like kids in adolelescence,

Shared our secrets, You know, True confessions.



Slick50-



But our love is no longer new,

~&~ I feel like your no longer you.

I can't pretend I can just walk away,

~&~ If you can, give me one last chance to say...



Verisma-



There is no way to erase, Idle time,

~&~ Every moment spent without you...

Is a moment lost in the abyss of time...

Outside the clouds are Icy gray,

~&~ My tears, Are falling,

As hard as the the rain...


Lets go back, to forward ~&~ Trace,

The times when we held each other

Like the sky holds the stars...

Back to the time when our love was new...



Slick50-



~&~ I could still see the world outside my window.
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Date Submitted: Aug 24, 2007 (04:38 AM)
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  HoneyBronze
09/11/07 (09:23 AM) 
This poem is deep. Loved the collabo, it flowed beautifully. I think this write is something we all can relate to.

  williesidney
08/26/07 (07:08 AM) 
Nice write keep up the good wrok 10 stars

  babyboy164
08/25/07 (12:25 PM) 
You guys did really well on this one...your writing was nsync...had great flow o eat...very easy to read...I loved it...

  Showcase
08/25/07 (09:34 AM) 
omg this is so creative both of you blazed this write up, I'm loving the concpet and the structure and just mad crazy outstanding flow awesome awesome awesome keep the ink flowing(Tee)

  mishel
08/24/07 (03:23 PM) 
this was amazing. both of you are very talented writers, and i loved the concept of this write as well. very well dont to both parties.

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