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"Oye"
  by drmbabyboy


I feel like everything we go through prolongs the facts.
We've come too far in our relationship to turn it back.
It's the little things we can't mention, that escape our reach.
I feel like school is out of session, but I still can teach.
If you allow me to console you, the way things used to be.
Then I would show you how It touches you, by touching me.
All the scars I keep are mental. I can only sleep.
When I can feel your body's heat, is it only me?
My mental anguish calls for answers, but you refuse all my questions.
Tell me am I out of line if I keep stressing your blessings.
Still it's only me that feels this like the wind in my ear.
Is it you or me that's calling do you bother to hear?
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Date Submitted: Nov 16, 2006 (07:27 PM)
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  Dejailayde
01/23/07 (06:48 PM) 
this is cool 2

  TS
12/28/06 (01:10 PM) 
OMG..this poem actually puts into words what one feels when falling out of reach with the one you love..i loved it..amazing! awesome! it caught my attention with the first line...good job papa!

  **HOLLA**
12/08/06 (01:23 PM) 
By the title I thought this was a spanish poem and I was excited to read it, but even in english you delivered the excitement... beautifully written... I can feel the emotions in your writings...

  Anesia
12/06/06 (02:23 PM) 
This Was Nice. Had Some Good Metaphors. The Only Time I Could Stand To Read A Love Poem Is If It Has Some Kinda Comparrison To It. Written Beautifully. Keep It Up

  It ago Bloodcl...
11/22/06 (07:35 PM) 
i hear u pon dat one BIG UP!

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