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"Pain And suffering"
  by Lil' Shadow


Sometimes I just wonder will my life ever get back look at the life I chose losing a best friend that I grew up with really hurts me when can I decide to hang it all up look I been through a lot out here see I been going through a lot of pain and no one have pay me attention so I stay to my self look I miss all my people that passed away look u is never forgotten as long I’m here cause u know who I be the young money jr look I know my eyes getting low look I smoke just to get by so why try to stop me from doing me see my mother is the greatest and I would hate it if I lose her cause they would really break me all the way down look I know I’ve done wrong to the point I couldn’t take it no more look all the killing stops here cause if nobody do nothing about it then I will cause I’m fed up please somebody help these people stop the killing cause enough is enough can’t u see the devil is trying to make us kill each other look I stand tall till the day I die see there is no more trouble and people wonder why I write I just gave u the reason I write so if u can’t understand then u can go to hell cause I’m gone ride or die till I die see I been through a lot I grew up with out a father but as the years go by now I have a step father and he is the greatest and I would like to say sorry for all the things I said it was my bad cause u know how I am but look I got my heart broken because of all these lies people been telling me and they know who they are cause I’m not about to sit here and look at them in they face see I will walk away before I say something see I told u I get money out here see I stay high so high that I don’t pay attention
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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2007 (11:08 AM)
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  l marie
09/11/08 (08:53 PM) 
This was good, I enjoyed it!

  MixedYellaBeau...
11/01/07 (02:24 PM) 
~Nice description of your life's path~ Nice write~ Very expressive and emotional on a certain level~ Keep putting them thoughts down~ Unique write

  Ciara
10/18/07 (11:36 AM) 
This is a very well put piece... i really like it... good write

  DSD
09/21/07 (12:09 PM) 
wow i havent never heard any one express their self like the way u did and thats is so hot you did yo thang so keep doing it and let these people know how u really feel i give u ten strz for that i'll give u more if i could that just how hot it is

  glo
09/21/07 (11:10 AM) 
i like how you put your life in a short amount of word.

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