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"Pain"
  by Omni


Many nights he made me cry
But when I talked to you
I knew you were supposed to be my guy
I never thought I would find the one
to treat me right
or the one who never fussed or wanted to fight
I never asked for much
but I guess Inever asked for things as such
It wasn't long between our break up
because hours later me and u hooked up
I never had time to relax
Neither took time for the healing or my painful cracks Maybe we sort of rushed
I didn't take time to turn around
or even picture myself in da dust.
It was like you rescued me
And i will alwayz cherish thee
We arent
seperated nor torn apart we just need time out and let me rest my heart
My love for you will alwayz be
And I hope one day we will both see.
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2006 (07:56 PM)
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  Ja'von
07/18/07 (10:28 AM) 
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  LiiL MiiZ RiiF
10/21/06 (05:58 PM) 
DAMN DiiZ SHiiT R3AL U KNO DAT ii W3NT THROUGH DiiZ SHiiT LOL

  Ricrac911
10/11/06 (10:42 AM) 
love the flow...I can relate!

  Muddyboi
10/11/06 (09:35 AM) 
i feel where u comin from...i had alot of love dat i jus couldnt handle at certain moments

  sha-tamar
10/07/06 (02:14 AM) 
i really like that, i can relate

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