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"Pain"
  by Goddess of Light


Give me a place of sorrow
Deep within the well of my soul
That you can touch
That you can see


Give me a place to bleed
Internal, my beating heart at fault
That can be mended
Sutured with your kisses


Give me a place to spill my unending tears
A hidden lake I may drown in
That is on a map you have
Dried with your laughter


Give me a place to gasp for breath
Heavy, under the shadows
That can be lifted by the weight of you
My lungs saturated


Give me a place to vanquish
Slowly eroded with loss
That can be felt in you
Reabsorbed to a place of union.
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Date Submitted: May 06, 2008 (06:56 AM)
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  dontnohow
05/24/09 (10:30 AM) 
slowly erode with loss... grat line ppls.. 10stars

  MzSpoon aka "T...
04/07/09 (07:50 AM) 
I'm glad that you showcased this today. Thanks for reading my work yesterday. I wished I would've met you earlier, but I'm thinking about leaving because this place is just so jammed packed with craziness. I came to write and get away from the real world...but it's just crazy everywhere you go. I needed this write today.

  Chris Jam
04/07/09 (06:53 AM) 
loved its sentiment and flow one query second stanza last line first word sutured not a word I've heard before which is a good thing just wanted to check tiz not a misspelling coz I always curse myself when I publish with misspelling aagh the joys of proof reading anyways dope molecule shuddering piece keep them coming Cj

  Ulises
04/07/09 (05:51 AM) 
Amazing poem,The work of a skilled poet,Very well written 10 stars no doubt

  O.X.Y.G.E.N.
01/13/09 (01:37 AM) 
the second stanza did it 4 me i don't read too many love poems but this is an excellent write..10 keep ya pen sharp...

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