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"Pain Releaser"
  by WIZ


Dirty little secrets
don't get room to grow

They stumble over mountains,
their deception rips their soul

Until their truth means nothing,
buired up with weeds

As their rumors spread
from their nasty little seeds

It all comes back to haunt them
their choices that they made

Then the day approaches
as their life begins to fade
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (09:27 AM)
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  ButterflyDream
03/22/09 (02:02 AM) 
very nice,such depth here.wonderful job lady:)

  HARLEMFINEST
01/25/09 (01:05 PM) 
haha..real tight piece...sista....lovin ur wordplay ,& flow.....i know exacly what u meant in dis rite....

  11th Wonduh
01/10/09 (11:45 AM) 
what lounges in the dark will always come to the light. a message well said

  big josh
01/07/09 (06:01 PM) 
damn dat shit was deep, 10s ma much luv

  KGgg
12/30/08 (01:55 PM) 
very true big sis...i feel you on here and u actually me wondering what exactly were you thinkin when you wrote this. whatever it was it helped you create this good piece. ten from me

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