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"Pain Replaced, Love Embraced"
  by SoulofNY
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Because you didnt love me right by khoklatelyrics


Because he didn’t love you right he no longer has an angel in his life,
No longer can he relish the radiance of an angel’s enchantment.
Just don’t let the last man’s mistakes encumber you from allowing your heart to see what is meant for you.
Nearby a man somewhere in the horizon waits for you, just keep counting your blessings and your dreams will come true.
I know for a fact I’d never raise my hand to you, not unless to caress the splendor of you, or just the simplicity of interlacing my hands with yours pulling you close and tell you I Love You.
Love’s an overwhelming essence that can take you over, just let God’s eyes be your site and he will see you through.
No longer will I need to go out not unless accompanied by you, never wanting to be apart your love is referred to as the inspiration that transpires art.
Thank God for the heavenly creation you are, how can any man neglect a shooting star, I‘d make a wish to keep you right where you are.
A beautiful woman you are, woven from ebony lace straight from the motherland, fine tuned with grace.
I know your hearts been hurt a time or two but love’s only misplaced it’s not lost for you.
As I have been instructed through my words to encourage you, you are a child of God you don’t need a man… he’ll provide for you.
With that said, don’t write off all men because there’s one in the physical form that would ride for you.
All you got to do is relinquish the pain that subsides deep within from the tattered abuse of man not destined for you.
If you allow me I’ll pick the fragile pieces labeled… handle with care, I’ll share you burden until the pain is no longer there.
Put a smile on your face don’t let him see what he’s taken away, instead show him the blessings you received and that there’s no longer gray clouds only brighter days.
Excuse me my sister for you are a Queen in all it’s your splendor, Light up the world and show them your royalty.
If not to them you are to me.
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Date Submitted: Jan 21, 2009 (09:02 AM)
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  J3LLYB3AN
02/10/09 (04:55 PM) 
this was a good write.. nice way to show someone you care about them..

  B. Rose
01/31/09 (12:10 PM) 
"how can any man neglect a shooting star, I'd make a wish to keep you right where you are" That was a beautiful line... this was such a sweet poem yo... I loved it... must fave it...

  Moz' Wizdom
01/28/09 (01:29 PM) 
Eloquent and encouraging. Very nice write!

  --->QUEENPIN O...
01/21/09 (11:29 AM) 
I know for a fact I’d never raise my hand to you, not unless to caress the splendor of you, or just the simplicity of interlacing my hands with yours pulling you close and tell you I Love You. <---took my fuckin breath away wit that...

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