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"part 2....of a thoughtless flow"
  by Phinest


I remember life
when life was just carefree
when the only person i thought about was me
never givin a shit about tomorrow
jus livin for today
now times then change
n remainin the same is no option
adaptin to the newer world
learnin to love more then those who love me
its crazy but smiles have its way of decievin
lookin happy on the outside
but on the in planning to lead me
on...but not today my mind is stronger
wiser hot like a gyser
keepin it simple but real
givin genuine smiles
n placin love on the seal
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Date Submitted: Feb 11, 2009 (05:08 PM)
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  Darkfon
02/25/09 (08:42 PM) 
true true im feeling you on this stay to yourself tho, the weak survive the strong evolve

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
02/22/09 (01:18 PM) 
great follow up to the other piece. this came with the same energy. like the realization from youth to adult mindframe that its not just about living for the moment, its owning each future moment before they happen as well. hot stuff again and those last two lines were a great ending.

  (Floetic~One) ...
02/18/09 (04:52 PM) 
wow your flow iz hot in this piece. keep doin your thang. 10 starz-

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