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"part1...of a thoughtless flow"
  by Phinest


feelin crazy inside
obsessed
with my dreams
cuz im hungry
tryin to power my stream
and damn people hate to see me gleam
cuz "doin me"is my theme
im pushin forward
conquerin new heights
when at the highest rank
in my hood i keep it tight
a strong black woman
willin to fight
yea...... my history
i neva lost sight
how they abuse my people
cuz they weren't light
MLK came
and broke a boundary
and my God is the 1 dat binds me
don't try
u can't get beside me
in mind......
is where u find me
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Date Submitted: Dec 28, 2008 (12:04 AM)
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  DEEP THOUGHT
03/15/09 (03:42 PM) 
nice. real. honest... keep on doin u

  T.R.I.G.G.U.S.
02/22/09 (01:14 PM) 
hard hitting, inspirational, powerful words here. just from the feel of it one can be filled with energy to rise to any occassion. hot stuff.

  (Floetic~One) ...
02/05/09 (04:35 PM) 
wow thatz what's up. keep doin you... conquering greater heights... may all your dreamz come tru. God bless you. 10 starz

  SmAsH/BaByFaCe
01/30/09 (06:58 PM) 
Nice ass write. Keep doing you shorty. Took us into your thoughts and kept it gangsta all at the same time, HOTTTTT!. TEN STARZ!

  iva
01/29/09 (05:32 PM) 
nice write phinest

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