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"Parts"
  by koolaiid


Jibberish;Blah Blah;How i'm feeln;
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some part of me is telln me 2 keep holdn on2 u
and not 2 give up on our love cuz we'll b together again
but how do i really know? cuz thee other part is sayn move on
which part do i listen 2? i'm so tired of being reminded of the pain
and damage that you caused but i miss the good times we use 2 have
should i just give up on us? or do i keep holdin on?
i'm so confused;feeling a bit miserable
how do i deal with this? how can i solve this problem?

the part of me sayn HOLD ON speaks louder
so i can hear it and only that most of the time
the other part is so low key i can barely hear it at times
but it does get 2 me at one point
maybe i just wanna hear that i should hold on
instead of letting go. maybe lettn go will hurt more then holdin on
but if it isnt something i jus wanna hear
will we really b a happy couple like we were b4
will things b the same or will i just lose affection for u
Which part 2 listen 2?? Is there a solution? if yes, show me.
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Date Submitted: Sep 14, 2008 (05:30 PM)
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  smooch
09/16/08 (12:26 PM) 
hmmm listen to ya heart can sometimes be a bit confusing ya know what i mean

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