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"~ passion lust!"
  by danceluv


Sweet Love - 112

I seen you lookin at me
So come on ova and say hi
We spotted each other across the room
My heart skip a beat when connected eyes
A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.


a.kinchen
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Date Submitted: Oct 05, 2008 (04:29 PM)
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10/11/08 (02:15 AM) 
goo d writin sweetheart... do more

  oshae
10/10/08 (02:43 PM) 
i like this write you went hard on this write i give you ten stars

  babygurl85
10/09/08 (10:01 PM) 
i really like this write right here. really girl that was too good

  Money Jr
10/09/08 (09:37 PM) 
Damn....U put a lot of detail in this 1.....Very vivid & passionate, Sexy as hell 2....Had 2 regain my composer 4 a minute lol.....But 4real 10z on deck!!!

  Sunkissed25
10/09/08 (09:36 PM) 
this is hot girl!!!! Fantastic write!!!

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