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"Passionate Lover"
  by YNNAiRA


He took his time, touched evey part, kissed her up and down her spine.
Though she didnt like it cuz in her mind it was a waste of time, she wanted to cut to the chase and end with a BANG! He refused time after time cuz he said a real man takes the TIME to explore and learn more of the anatomy that makes up a womans curves. He said he was a passionate lover. She said his slowness and gentleness didnt turn her out and that to her a real man would just flip her and eat her out. Yet he refused, so she walked away and left him in a lonely daze but she didnt care, already in her sight another man. Tall dark and handsome like a refrain it repeats. She asked if he was a passionate lover, with a sudden ease he replied "No", music to her ears cuz she was done with those. Took him back to her place, to her amazement passionate lover was gone. Nothing was stopping her so she gave him the green light and it was ready set GO.....He brought her back with one stroke, said "get off we're done". Now she was left lonely and cold, felt empty missing her passionate other, thinking to herself "damn i shouldve stayed with my passionate lover"
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Date Submitted: Sep 28, 2008 (12:13 PM)
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  DC*
03/22/09 (10:21 AM) 
ummm we gotta collab if u wanna i can get wit dis 1 ma

  DC*
02/20/09 (11:11 PM) 
yea i love dis one ma but a real man knows about patience and how to please and not explore da body but read da mind at da same time lol im Corey aka Mr Sex with Ice lol mamita welcome to gs poetry

  Ryta
02/20/09 (06:30 PM) 
woooooooooooooow dat waz kind of deep But it's lame azz niggas dat will do that 2 u.

  Shy Gyrl
12/14/08 (09:16 PM) 
uh oh we have a story teller on our hands....but i think that "let me kiss u up and down your spine ish is lame too"....but nobody cares right? right....this was a beautiful piece. with the right amount of sexy.

  DEEP THOUGHT
11/04/08 (12:26 AM) 
great write

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