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"Patience For Love"
  by SmAsH/BaByFaCe
  - This Poem is a response to the poem For You, I Got Time! by Sweettweety23


I knew there was a love out there just for me
One that has all the qualities I want in a woman
Few tried but obviously didnt succeed
There was a void in my heart
And empty it stayed for a while
I deserve your love

....Patience For Love

Because of the past heart breaks
I kept my guards up from future aches
Barely letting females close
The door to my heart I kept closed
Hesitant to all that would approach
I want your love

.....Patience For Love

To God I took my need
I had to come correct so I got down on my knees
I told Him nightly what I wanted
Down to the smallest of details
Believing He would come through for the kid
Months passed and passed
And on this one night I would later know He did
I found love

.....Pateince For Love

She told me how she felt first
And no responce I first had
But on my mind her words stayed constantly
Until I was really ready
To talk about these feelings I had for her in return

Your situation it somewhat similar to mine
So to you I say dont rush for a response
The situation will definitely come to pass
Erase all negative thoughts as they ensue
And remember patience is a virtue





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Date Submitted: Sep 10, 2009 (11:47 PM)
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  cocoadiva
09/13/09 (11:21 AM) 
awe this is such a beautiful write.. it was filled with such love and devotion.. keep writing.. 10s and a fav..

  THE TRUE LADY ...
09/12/09 (06:33 PM) 
I LOVE THIS ONE. SO TRUE. CAUSE I KNOW I THOUGHT AT LEAST 3 OTHERS WERE THE MEN FOR ME. AND THEY LET ME DOWN. TIME AND TIME AGAIN WHEN I THOUGHT I COULD FIND LOVE ON MY OWN. UNTIL I GAVE IT TO GOD AND TOLD HIM WHAT I WANTED AND DIDNT SETTLE FOR LESS. I GAVE YOU THE RUN AROUND UNTIL I FELT YOU WERE READY BUT YOU ARE AND IM SO BLESSED TO HAVE WAITED FOR YOU. LOVE YOU BABE!

  Sweettweety23
09/11/09 (12:41 AM) 
Awwwwzzz u made me shed tears Thats beautiful....Thank u madly!! I'm definately inspired and motivated by you two and I will wait on God, only he knows whats best for me!

  *Jazique*
09/11/09 (12:04 AM) 
True...Patience is very hard sometimes though...especially when there are other factors that you have to go through to get there, but those who are patient recieve the greatest rewards...

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