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"Patron On Rocks (I Love Her)"
  by TATE89


I wanna mix you up with this drink
I truly like while, we drinkin it
And having a wonderful time tonight

Like im coming up with a love poem
To get you in a nice, calm, relaxful, vibe
When we tipsy off these Patron on rocks

When a slow, and sexy beat comes on the radio
While these ice cubes melts on your sexy brown body
Like im teasing, and kissin you all over you

Lil`mama you such a flirt while you say " I LOVE YOU PAPI"
When i come back and say "I LOVE YOU MAMACITA"
That i`ll be there when you need a love

Like we drinkin Patron On Rocks

Cause im such a nasty boy on these poems
When drink this Patron On Rocks

I wanna spend the night tonight baby
So i could, make you fall deep in love
When we could, still drink this Patron On Rocks
While we touchin the stars

On this night full with, happniess
At the sametime The Patron is
Kickin in fast, like a fastline
On the California freeway,
Trying to escape to Mexico
With you

So we could get married
And you could my wifey
Forever like the sun
You know baby..


long night - nelly ft usher
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Date Submitted: Sep 06, 2008 (04:21 PM)
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09/10/09 (02:14 AM) 
Nicely Done!!

  TANENE
09/04/09 (03:39 AM) 
Kinky topic. All in all good write...keep pushin that pen!

  Gabreeeezy
01/13/09 (01:19 PM) 
like im coming up with a love poem to get you in a nice, calm, relaxful vibe.. that that line was tight.

  lupay
01/11/09 (08:54 PM) 
PERFECT WORDS FOR A GREAT ENDING

  ItzBr1tn3yBiit...
10/02/08 (01:36 PM) 
aww...thats cute...:)....very sweet...10

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