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"Pen gotta a bigger Bite Then Jaws"
  by bookum


paper still winter white..pen icy in the cold..
Im so daily planet, Clark Kent cant stand it..
superman's favorite hero...

rear view

mirror

But im much more bigger, then objects appear
2 steps behind light and these years made me bold ..
started writing from the shadow...now my shadow want sum light
Mind holding all the fight...pen want a little heat

to
shed
a lot
light.

Call Mr G.E, illuminate the block...
self proclaimed my pen, super fucking Hot (lmfao)
ink drips like magma...dries harder then chrome..
words deeper then diamond cuts..
spitting karats silly rabbits these Trix aren't for show..
not 60 minutes of headline news,,,but 60 seconds of

oh

no

he didn't just CNN us...world gone bad, but pen groin rock steady
top of the world titanic oceans swimming with danger..
pen + sharks= a bigger bite then jaws..bigger night then
Santa decked halls....im trying mecca, to answer my pens calls
hanging up on the devil's applause. he gave me a standing ovation
for writing about blood loss, but that was for a cause
bloods thicker then water, dense Satan cant drown me..
im swimming with ink poison no life raft..so sick when my words float..
choke never... even my failures stay clutch








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Date Submitted: Mar 27, 2009 (04:57 PM)
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  Jody
05/07/09 (05:07 PM) 
Aight! lol, that's pretty much all you can say after one of these... Aight! lol... much love.

  MR. BYRD
03/29/09 (06:17 PM) 
love the metaphors and the wordplay you used i this...deep flow and the truth indeed...push that pen...

  NICKY BOO
03/28/09 (05:25 PM) 
damn this is deep...im lovin ur word flow...i think u have one of the most creative and imaginitive ways of writin...i love this concept...ten stars

  Moey
03/28/09 (03:59 AM) 
hotttt wite! fav line: "words deeper than diamond cuts.. spitting karats silly rabbits these trix aren't for show.." great write. 10 and fav....nd thnx ma poem comment! Keep doin wut u do {{Moey}}

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