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"PEN N PAPER (NO DEFINITION PART II)"
  by Eryn


WORDZ HAPPEN TO FLOW LIKE A RIVER OF TEARZ... IM NOT ASHAMED AND NOR DO I FEAR.... IT'Z GETN REAL 4 ME AND I CANT HELP BUT IMAGIN A LIFE THAT ENDED WITHOUT US HAVIN THIS CHEMISTRY... IM LIKE A PEN... U ARE MA PAPER AND I HATE TO SEE MA INK RUN DRY OR UR LINES FADE... SO WHEN WILL WE BE TOGETHER AND COMBINE OUR NATURAL ABILITIES AND COLLIDE AS 1...I COULD NEVER SEE US NOT BEIN TOGETHER....1 WAY OR ANOTHER WE'LL HAVE A TITLE AZ SUCH... BUT NOT EVEN WEBSTER CAN CREATE A WORD AND EXPLANATION 4 US. PURELY PLATONIC IZ WAT WERE AIMIN 4...TEMPTATION HAS LOST IT'Z BATTLE SO MANY TIMEZ BEFORE YET MEMORIEZ OF US WRITING TOGETHER HAUNTS THA PAGES OF MA NOTEBOOK. INKED WITH PASSION OF VOCABULARY SERVING IT'S PURPOSE AS A NEW PAGE.....................
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Date Submitted: Mar 07, 2008 (12:20 AM)
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  stlpimpin27
03/19/08 (08:03 PM) 
IM RUNNING OUT OF STUFF TO SAY ABOUT YOUR POEMS, HOW MANY DIFFERENT WAYS CAN I SAY ERYN HAS VERRY GOOD SKILLS. I KNOW I CANT TOUCH YOU

  NINO
03/11/08 (11:30 PM) 
HAHAAAAAAA...Damn, dis was krazy ma! I liked this one better than Part 1...they were both nice but THIS ONE...(shakes head)...all I can say is nice work. The flow and wordplay were almost flawless and you delivered this piece very well. Nice work, you get 10 from me

  princessB
03/07/08 (01:27 AM) 
this is so fresh!!! very creative and artistic. i love your use of metaphors in this one.10 and a fav

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