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Lord Mason Da Rula Perfect Vision (Complex Allitersen Style)
by Lord Mason Da Rula



Perfect Vision

Subtly
noticing the
sultry sections
of your
captivating curves
that
secretly seduce
me
into
sheer submission

Steadily stoking
the flames
of
my soul
into
total rapture
blazing away
to
the edge
of reason

I
...
am lost
in the
alluring ambiance
of your
amiable aura
bewildered by
such
a
blinding beauty
that is unsurpassed

Fascinating fantasies
ravishly rampage
my thoughts
Never
have I
been
fixated
on a
singular being
so concretely

Believing
wholeheartedly
that
you
are the
perfect vision
inconceivable imagery
that
I
long for

A Word

From

Da Lord

Mason Da Ruler
Diesel From Th D Inc.
Copyrighted 2008



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Published: Mar 02, 2008 (12:21 AM)
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Date: 04/24/08 (12:22 AM)
Author: Lord Mason Da Rula
Poem Title: Perfect Vision {(.ca...
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03/22/08 (03:51 PM) 
hmmm...... I still like this -singular being so concretely Believing wholeheartedly that you are the perfect vision inconceivable imagery

03/04/08 (01:28 AM) 
ur words seduction of my mind intrigue me very much ... thank u ... my lord

03/02/08 (04:12 PM) 
I really this this poem its tastefully sexy.short sweet and str8 to the point.In short ten stars

03/02/08 (11:37 AM) 
well i think this write was pretty creative and pretty well written. I am always a fan of alliteration even when its done sparingly as you did here. Nice job. - T.I.D.

03/02/08 (02:36 AM) 
you could have went HEAVIER with it... but ill like the change in style and loved the background... and the song.. :) man...nvm dude.lol.

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