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"-----Phinest-----"
  by lilrazor
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Razor by Phinest


----------Phinest------------

-----What U Say-----

For hours and days it seems that we talk
You ask me my motives like its u I bought
I like u and I know that youre feeling my mind
I told you i wanted chill with u and stand up like your spine
We both on our grind trying to come up anyway possible
I'll be there for u if youre there for me to overcome any obstacle
Do u care about me? or u just playing with my feelings?
When I text u sometimes am thinking bout u
But the question is do you think of me?
Now What U Say....am just waiting to see
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Date Submitted: Mar 14, 2009 (02:19 PM)
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  Dreka Babii
07/06/09 (03:40 PM) 
awww....so sweet

  sexybee
04/08/09 (04:33 PM) 
Man I feel u on this 1 10satrs********

  Lique
03/16/09 (12:51 PM) 
j...i'm thinking you have ur hands full with this lady :) i've missed ur writes tho! i subscribed for a reason and i've been slackin hard on reading ANYbody's scribes... my fault i got you tho...and as for this one...tho simple it still carries ur blessing in it 100

  Phinest
03/14/09 (02:22 PM) 
2 answer ur question sumtimes i think of u...but maybe if we were in personal it wud b all the time....well when i approach Tn...we'll c how bold u really are stay up 10strz

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