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"Phone to Ear"
  by getchamndrite


Phone to ear I sit
As her nocturnal breath exchange occurs
Her last words quiet...drifting… then S I L E N T
And I wonder, as her breath teeters between exhalation and a snore
What floats into that pretty little head of hers?
I send her my love as the R.E.M approaches
In my mind I take hold of her hips and pull her into “her spot”
I wrap my arms tight around her
Kiss her shoulder
Whisper “Alfalfa”
It’s quite clear that I adore this woman
I cherish the view of her that I’m allowed to see
Such beauty and depth
Such growth of mind and spirit
Such complexity and simplicity
My ear receives the gift of her sleeping breath
She will awaken with an “I love you” note tacked on the door of her heart.
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Date Submitted: Jan 09, 2009 (02:48 AM)
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  African Queen
05/14/09 (07:21 AM) 
beautiful, sweet, lovely and well expressed. i miss your scribes girl n u too...get your ass back and get penning them interesting piece up in here...lol!! i will be looking out...

  Shani. Medicin...
04/09/09 (06:28 PM) 
Surreal write...Enjoyed being an observer hovering like a cloud to this read. Excellent

  Yas
02/18/09 (09:30 PM) 
This just seems to have such a light relaxing uplifting feeling to it Made me put on a smile such beautiful sentiments expressed withing this

  WarmNillaSuga
01/28/09 (04:15 PM) 
what a soft write...each line read was like receiving a leaf drifting down from the sky...each one containing the picture you created with each word...splendidly beautiful write! *sigh*

  Dana Dane... M...
01/16/09 (11:28 AM) 
You painted the perfect picture of a timeless moment enjoyed my true lovers. This made my heart smile.

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