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"Pick up"
  by Blakfiya


They Reminisce Over You - Pete Rock & C.L. Smooth
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if your mind is as
deep as your skin
or flows as smooth
as the sinew flexing
while you are walking by

stop for a minute
and find my answer

in the caramel
of my silky coat and
the column of my throat
swallowing upon the hope

that your insightful question
will be the key

I've been wanting a conversation
O yes, a conversation
minus innuendo of what we could get into
strolling down sexual avenues

just a smile so bright
that the white of your teeth
pull that smile from my inner
and make me forget inhibitions
that you parlay into dinner

a busy place
with sports being casted
where I need to lean in close to hear you ask if…

this will do

oh, its certainly fine
…as my wine glass is filled
…and our world visions get spilled
to a rhythm that bumps to the beat
of both our excited fists
pounding out pointed emphasis

leisurely glance at the watch
and coyly state, "oh, damn, its getting late"

…continue on with the debate long after we’ve ate

Till finally
We full
And at ease
sharing our mental-i-tease
when you flag down the waiter with

…check please

And I’m satiated off of a conversation
O yes, a good conversation

and a riddle that I'd like to solve

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Date Submitted: Jan 05, 2009 (04:21 PM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
01/06/09 (11:45 AM) 
im in agreeance wit everyone else...the message is dope...i think i would like a man like this too...good convo is always a plus...when u find em lemme know if he got a brother, uncle, cousin, daddy...somethin...ctfu...nice work Fiya...

  BlessedOne
01/06/09 (08:25 AM) 
Nice piece Miss Lady! Maybe after the play-offs this will actually happen all across America. Squeezed in before the Superbowl. lol

  harley quinn/a...
01/06/09 (12:27 AM) 
very much enjoyed ...smiling

  Jody
01/05/09 (11:26 PM) 
background is hot too!

  Jody
01/05/09 (11:24 PM) 
I loved this! One of my most fav things to be doing is sharing good freaking convo... and of course jokes; ) got to have jokes, B, got to! lol, this was real nice... I enjoyed! Good filling poetry... lol. and vivid imagery... I think we've all been at that restaurant... lol.

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