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"PINK * Pic is worth 1000 words challenge 17 lines no more no less*"
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When I saw this I automatically thought of the cells of a breast and breast cancer.

She is a chest barren
An empty landform
Where two mountains should have been
A full figure with a seduction
Underneath her collarbone
Only brick walls could appreciate
a water color painting
On the inside of God’s cheek

She never questioned his artistic vision
Why he made her clay woman
With no intention of making her vase
Only mud
Like some puddle in the rain
Like some lost colors on concrete
A gasoline crayon box
The sky refused to call rainbow
A woman, a chest refused to call mother
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Date Submitted: Jul 14, 2009 (10:59 AM)
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  vagrom
07/14/09 (07:00 PM) 
my first thought of the pic would have been "baby"...but i see it and for You to pull this piece out of that is genius...well done, Divine...

  AscendingSoul
07/14/09 (01:57 PM) 
How do you post/submit pics on here anyways anyone? I do a "LOT" of my works' to pieces (images, graphics. photos, artwork, etc.) but can't post them on here for some reason so. Can anyone be of assistance?!?!

  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/14/09 (11:05 AM) 
omfg Prose...only u could take a pic like this that looks like someone done spilled they paint and make it into something so wonderful and insightful...dammit man!

  *~Raw Sensuali...
07/14/09 (11:02 AM) 
...and you're welcome lovely :)

  *~Raw Sensuali...
07/14/09 (11:01 AM) 
Dang Ma... I lost my Mama to Cancer in 19 parts of her body... this brings tears to my eyes....whew... **fanning face to keep from dropping liquids**....

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